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Open Poetry #35

For A Time

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2005-07-01 09:51 AM

Oh love, that I could bend time
reflect it through a glass
bring you close to me
that we might touch at last
That our eyes could meet
our hearts could beat
together in time.
Oh love that this sweet rhyme
could touch your soul
make you lose control
and become mine
oh love, just for a time.

WhiteRose

"fit to be tied"

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-07-01 10:04 AM

beautiful thoughts here...

very nicely done!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-07-01 11:04 AM

Anne~
Oh ... how I like this one~

I must say that I immediately began singing a favorite tune~
Something in your verse broke me into song~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-07-01 11:40 AM

yes, this was so much like a song, sweet and low voiced, would love to hear this to music....well done!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-07-01 12:42 PM

*singing along*

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2005-07-01 01:03 PM

Anne, this is very pretty.
I enjoyed reading it.
Hugs,

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2005-07-01 02:06 PM

Oh, indeed... yes... please... forever. *S*

I love this! *S*

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