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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2005-07-01 09:51 AM



Oh love, that I could bend time
reflect it through a glass
bring you close to me
that we might touch at last
That our eyes could meet
our hearts could beat
together in time.
Oh love that this sweet rhyme
could touch your soul
make you lose control
and become mine
oh love, just for a time.

WhiteRose

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1 posted 2005-07-01 10:04 AM


beautiful thoughts here...
very nicely done!

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2 posted 2005-07-01 11:04 AM


Anne~
Oh ... how I like this one~

I must say that I immediately began singing a favorite tune~
Something in your verse broke me into song~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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3 posted 2005-07-01 11:40 AM


yes, this was so much like a song, sweet and low voiced, would love to hear this to music....well done!
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4 posted 2005-07-01 12:42 PM


*singing along*
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5 posted 2005-07-01 01:03 PM


Anne, this is very pretty.
I enjoyed reading it.
Hugs,

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6 posted 2005-07-01 02:06 PM


Oh, indeed... yes... please... forever. *S*

I love this! *S*

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