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Beautiful Woman
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Beautiful Woman |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Beautiful Woman I know I don't know you but I'd sure like to and I'd like to think I know your spirit it's this little gift I seem to have and I'd wish for a gift like you with your red hair cascading and your smile wrapping around my heart you're a beautiful woman, inside and out I'd sure like to know all about you I do know you're something else you seem to me to be one hell of a woman all sunlight and autumnal glow your grace and kindness amazes me you toe the line between cute and sexy like nobody's business I see the wonder in you, even from far away you're a beautiful woman, without a doubt I'd sure like to wander all about you I'd like to say more about this; beautiful women are a dime a dozen so I should rephrase this heart speak of mine you're simply the most divinely beautiful woman that I've ever seen I don't say these things in hope you'll come discover me I say 'em because they need to be said the world needs to shine in the wonder of you and you're making great progress so far the camera captures your heart for me and everyone that sees the great spirit of you, bright and vibrant you're a walking painting framed somewhere in heaven look at me, I'm creating new cliches let me just say you amaze me you're one hell of a beautiful woman I'd sure like to get to know you more and maybe I will someday Yeah, you're where it's at yeah, you look cute in that hat and I sure do love your tattoo yeah, I'm thinking about you Yeah, he's a lucky man the one you hold in your hands Elvis Costello singin' his song for you and yeah, I'm singing for you too "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice admiration here well described |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
I think I know her. Well at least I've seen her. But don't stop creating new cliches. adagio |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Elvis Costello is the man...  I read this as if it were written for me...lol...thanks for allowing me that. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
An incredibly beautiful write Zach with a wonderful flow to it. Very well done. Give me your heart |
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