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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
With you I learned to crawl after walking, then run after crawling always keeping up in case it dawned before gone~ love So I continued stroking genius a blind-folded act easy to follow and though I bared teeth in quiet seethe at my slow but steady descent to last once upon a time, I... ~tier |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So I continued stroking genius ~*~ I swear, you do... or your muse does, every time s/he allows you to pick up a pen! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like the way you did this, the structure here is part of the poetry. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a blind-folded act easy to follow and though I bared teeth in quiet seethe at my slow but steady descent to last once upon a time, whoa...what a read...this, speaks true volumns...tremendous write! Enjoyed this very much |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, ladies! ~tier  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tiersdin~ I feel an ache in this one~ Your writing makes one feel~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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