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Open Poetry #35

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Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

0 posted 2005-06-27 03:59 PM

When the sun rises
shadows fall.

On the mean streets,
the lean streets,
the don't leave the scene streets,

they land hard.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2005-06-27 05:51 PM

Nan~
I LOVE IT !!!!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2005-06-28 12:09 PM

awesome awesome...this IS a keeper

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2005-06-28 07:52 AM

Nan darling one this is, as has been said, utterly, utterly awesome. Why oh why can't I do brevity? Well, no matter, you do it best, and brilliantly. This is definitely a keeper, but then all yours are.

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
xx xx xx

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-06-28 07:54 AM

Whoa...packs one mighty wake up call, doesn't it...

Impressive and insightful write...loved this!

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2005-06-28 02:27 PM

Thanks guys, I so appreciate your responses.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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