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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-06-26 04:13 PM





Wake in the day see the tides
light up the smoke just one
last try

The damange is done and so
you say goodbye. No more
tears as you say adue.

Can't help but to still
love you, In my mind all
the time oh what do I do
when I can't get over
loving you?

Pick your hand place it on
my hand pretend that we
are okay and that we will
see each other another day.

Here I am standing here my dear
while your at home,in your own
zone not wanting any part of me
yet I am the one that still
silent pleas unheard.

Can't help but to stil love
you,In my mind all the time,oh
what do I do when I can't get
over loving you?

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2005-06-27 07:08 PM


Nice writing...no one wants to lose someone they care for...time will help you...James
Foxyoasis
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2005-06-27 07:09 PM


ty

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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with you
3 posted 2005-06-27 07:55 PM


yes, James is right, it takes time...and that is never a fair answer, but it's true...time will give you distance from the hurt..
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