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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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Lost in a world that I don't know left with a letter of broken paper cuts upon my finger tips I bled blue blood for my tears have strugged so much more My body goes stagnet, my heart no longer matures,being with you is what I really adored. Now im alone in my home, a computer screen that blinks, yea laugh this is my new zone. Your eye's they haunt me while im asleep they keep me in this world of incomplete To choose someone else over me? Never even heard of the idea at least not from me Your fine your okay heck you got a new mail order bride on the way, loose yourself in another that seems to understand by your happiness if you can. I may be miserable I may be bitter I may even snicker but I will be the one with true happiness you see,for I think you will wish you had what I had you just never really choose to see. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Ahhh, the beauty of hindsight... and wanting that which we could have had we only made the choice sooner Great write Foxyoasis |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
thank you |
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Kurai Kumo Junior Member
since 2005-06-23
Posts 32Houston, Texas, USA |
I truly admire that poem. It was one that blew me away. I'm truly crying cause that seems like the case between me and someone else. People do that kind of thing someone does to people. Can't even find a person that simply love you back. People judge you by the way you look,dress(i dress gothic), or simply don't listen to the same music you do. And pretty much what their friends will think of you. I wish I could let go of this one person that I fell in love with but my heart keeps her locked in there. Maybe I'm going crazy. But I love this poem very very much. Thank you! Be honest to someone's words cause, in the end they will be honest to yours. |
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Tndeer1 Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 87TN. USA |
I'm another one that it truly hits home for but for me, many yrs. ago. Didn't need the tears at this point but thank you anyway. God Bless! Tndeer1 |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Now this takes me back to feelings I have had before....great write. Jenn E |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I relate to this well |
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