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Startime55
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0 posted 2005-06-22 01:50 PM



Magic Light

Lost in dreams of mystic weave
I choose the themes to believe
Then I draw each perfect scene
Starting with a blank, white screen

I paint colors mixed with sound
Of fields where flowers abound
With singing brook flowing by
Still more that does not comply

The meadow in dark of night
Comes alive with magic light
Full moon bathes each blade of grass
As fairies come forth amass

Girls shimmer in brilliant hue
As boys prepare to pursue
Cries of delight fill the air
When girls beckon and boys dare

The meadow repeats this scene
Each time the full moon is seen

Karen Mc Neil-Tomayer
June 22, 2005

© Copyright 2005 Karen Mc Neil-Tomayer - All Rights Reserved
HopeS
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1 posted 2005-06-22 01:53 PM


Karen such beautiful , magical images

Hope

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-06-22 02:27 PM


like what you choose to see...lovely
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2005-06-22 02:28 PM


so magical and delightful this picture you paint for us.  Lovely write.
Enchantress
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4 posted 2005-06-22 02:48 PM




Beautiful Karen!
And, the full moon was so big and seemed so close to earth last night..
as far as the faeries? *grin*
Well...you gotta know I believe!!

*Check your email*

Luv ya, Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

froggy
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5 posted 2005-06-22 03:30 PM


Enjoyed this read.
Closing ones eyes you can see the images
you discribed.

:-)

WindWalker
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6 posted 2005-06-24 10:20 AM


You have a way with words! such beautiful imagery in this poem!!!!!!
vandana
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7 posted 2005-06-24 10:21 AM


liked it
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2005-06-24 11:09 AM


Karen, I thoroughly enjoyed the magic of your expressed Light.

While I was reading your mystical words, I was transported into that magical world.

Love & Magic Light,
Linda

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2005-06-24 11:13 AM


Startime55,
A delight to read.

Martie
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10 posted 2005-06-24 12:10 PM


The Magic light has brought magic words to you...I'm so glad!     
Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2005-06-24 12:13 PM


"Lost in dreams of mystic weave
I choose the themes to believe"

those two lines say it all.

well done.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Pilgrimage
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12 posted 2005-06-24 12:14 PM


I like the magic light of the moon, and I like this poem.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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13 posted 2005-06-24 02:41 PM


Karen~
I saw the faeries
bathed in light
dance the meadow
in delight~

LOVE YOUR PENNING~

I, too, BELIEVE !!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

iliana
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14 posted 2005-06-24 02:51 PM


That is one magical scheme I sure would like to witness, Startime55!  Or then again, maybe I just did!    Enchanting!   .......jo
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15 posted 2005-06-25 02:19 PM


very cool writing here!
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