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Honeybunch
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0 posted 2005-06-24 04:16 PM


The gardens grow green in the province of Now
with no speck of gold, red, orange, purple,
but in this, oh, so easy repose
a white lily grows and I sympathize.  

Between the stealthy creep of the known
a soul betwixt monsters of life’s strangling hold
confronts the seasons like a front-line soldier  
faces the wrath of those he can’t know.    
  
Above purity the birds gather like saints
and are we not all saintly somewhere
after creating landscapes of denial
and framing a life behind pains of the past?  

The lily self-willed grows wherever it will
as we in dreams commune with the wise  
and ingest the truth of this lowly life
as good and consoling required nourishment.      

In the silent manner of love still to be known
the lily wide-eyed stares into daylight  
and embraces the land of mortal man  
until nature decrees it’s time to depart.  

The lily, white lily, how brave thou art
to alone step forth into pastures unknown
or is there a hand pulling, guiding, leading,
from there where the saintly abide with the wise?

Helen / 24 June 2005


© Copyright 2005 Helen - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2005-06-24 04:23 PM


From one lily to another....I love this poem and thank you for the inspiration.  Are you reading my mind today, Helen?  Yes, I think you are!  This is a terrific write and touches me deeply....I'm saving it for days I need courage.   .....lily jo
Honeybunch
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2 posted 2005-06-24 04:29 PM


Ah, dear Jo - when it's the season, it's the season.  What can I say?     Hmm?  Well, here's to the lily - may it have a good life!  Thanks for the read.
Martie
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3 posted 2005-06-24 04:47 PM


Helen

To find inspiration in the lily is a special thing...for you can find it anywhere, if there.  I wrote a lily poem a while back, and it continues to be one of my favorites.

"and are we not all saintly somewhere"

Yes, and I love that question and the obvious answer gleaned from your poem.



nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2005-06-24 05:27 PM


a beautiful poem, Helen even if of a different lily...


My neighbor's daughter got married last month and she had white lilies as her bouquet..they were  so lovely as are your words.

M

passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-06-24 08:29 PM


wonderful write, yes
timothysangel1973
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6 posted 2005-06-24 09:51 PM




Beautifully penned m'freind

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-06-25 12:31 PM


Enjoyed...James
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