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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2005-06-24 10:44 AM

It is not easy
when I am here
in this solitary
place and
space of mind

the emptiness
surrounds me
until it is absorbed
through every pore

rushing
through my veins
until I am left

      emotionless

staring at the walls
listening to the sounds
of silence
breaking with every
tick of clock

   praying
          for time to stop

just long enough
for me to catch my breath
to analyze
any feelings left

but there are none
to be found
here or there
I am void
of feelings
anywhere.

Left cold,
I lie within
this secluded tomb
trying to regain the warmth
of mothers womb.

I am
   voiceless,
alone with my spirit scarred
here, in this nothingness....

      it is hard.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2005-06-24 10:53 AM

Gentle Spirit
A hard write for a gentle spirit.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-06-24 10:55 AM

Gosh, girl! To be able to write of such emptiness when you are so full of spirit and Light, is quite a poetic feat!

Hugs with oodles of love,
Linda

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2005-06-24 10:57 AM

"staring at the walls
listening to the sounds
of silence
breaking with every
tick of clock

praying
for time to stop

just long enough
for me to catch my breath"

*whew*
loved this

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2005-06-24 11:05 AM

As long as you have those who love you at PIP you will never be alone...Your pain is shared by many who love you...Keep rambling and some of the pain and emptiness will fade (I wish my ramblings were half as good at this is)...My heart goes out to you...*big hugs*

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2005-06-24 05:29 PM

C'mere my gentle one

mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2005-06-24 07:20 PM

There are moments
when quiet
is loud...

and times when loud
is clicked off.

This...

rambles with a quiet serenity of noise.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2005-06-24 08:25 PM

you are writing me again

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

8 posted 2005-06-24 09:53 PM

"I am
voiceless,
alone with my spirit scarred
here, in this nothingness....

it is hard."

Amen sister... I am feeling your heart-words tonight

Tima

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2005-06-24 10:00 PM

Donna?

C'mere...

Kurai Kumo
Junior Member

since 2005-06-23

Posts 32
Houston, Texas, USA

10 posted 2005-06-24 10:00 PM

Well written poem.

Be honest to someone's words cause, in the end they will be honest to yours.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2005-06-25 12:25 PM

Nice writing...James

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

12 posted 2005-06-27 11:33 AM

THANKS AND HUGS TO ALL....

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