Open Poetry #35 |
Another's Spiritual Growth |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
prelude sends an opium center scrambling obscuring, narrow winding roads with firm opinions, rolling away, into shadowy depths of some quiet backwater snowdrifts become finicky & impatient departing this part of the world vigorous, like the archway to tomorrow with unfaltering pace squealing and making extraordinary sounds wrapping the extension cord of unhappy things around it’s arm standing in this water, my senses merge with an aura of surface, like no other locking sight upon this room, imbued with thoughts standing beside me like a rattan chair with a decorator pillow i’m full grown in cumulative effects unshackled and devilish hungry for a firmly focused destiny all is ablaze, with summarized tease enticing memory to come full circle hearing weather plant a soft gentle voice in my bosom childhood sprouts, irresistibly sincerely, wishing to play, follow the leader with a circular fountain in the center of this garden of ancient shade trees extended beyond suggestion there i saw a lingering warmth swathing through the unclaimed beauty of means such willfull, independent beauty of means leaving me, dependent upon "no thing" for happiness other then surrendering to all things yet to find standing face to face with wooing instinct and my name two loud colored butterflies spread their wings in supple vocabulary flying into some great intangible with a will to nurture each own |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sure wish I could write like this, but only you can a wonderful piece this morning |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Just let the butterflies do their work. Good morning sweet. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lovely Lee, that was lovely! It is one who is well on their way down their spiritual path, who writes such words as these: ~ "such willfull, independent beauty of means leaving me, dependent upon "no thing" for happiness other then surrendering to all things yet to find" Sending you blessings of bounty and joy, Linda |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautiful LeeJ. Just simply beautiful. Enjoyed this read. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ Each penning a well-worded treasure-trove~ 'childhood sprouts, irresistibly sincerely, wishing to play, follow the leader with a circular fountain in the center of this garden of ancient shade trees extended beyond suggestion there i saw a lingering warmth swathing through the unclaimed beauty of means' LOVE the idea of 'childhood' sprouting 'irrestibly'~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"there i saw a lingering warmth swathing through the unclaimed beauty of means such willfull, independent beauty of means leaving me, dependent upon "no thing" for happiness other then surrendering to all things yet to find standing face to face with wooing instinct and my name two loud colored butterflies spread their wings in supple vocabulary flying into some great intangible with a will to nurture each own" LeeJ.......this takes my breath away! So very perfect! ....jo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Each and every word you write LeeJ is perfectly placed in relationship to the beauty within. Excellent! TD |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Wow! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Ok doky LeeJ(;. I liked this alot good read.(: -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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