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Kurai Kumo
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since 2005-06-23
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Houston, Texas, USA

0 posted 2005-06-24 12:07 PM


The wind slowly blows,
I cam to proclaim my for love for you,
But your nowhere to be found,
Searching the million broken roads,
The sky grows cold,
Blacken and blue,
Your shadow that grew so close to me
Suddenly disappears without a trace,
I'm lost in the sotrmy nights,
No one to stand beside close and tight,
Your lost love that once guided me through the darkness,
I'm tired of walking alone,
I hear your voice,
Telling me where to go,
Running down the broken roads,
That seems to get longer and longer,
Will you give me wings,
So I can fly straight into your heart,
Would you open the door?
And let me in?
Because I'm not complete without you.

© Copyright 2005 Keith A Rusler - All Rights Reserved
timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
1 posted 2005-06-24 12:09 PM


Welcome To PIP m'friend

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beautiful write here, from the heart

Tima

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with you
2 posted 2005-06-24 12:13 PM


This is so romantic wonderful first post I am really looking forward to reading more from you!
Kurai Kumo
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3 posted 2005-06-24 12:14 PM


Thank you. I'm not that really good of a poetry. When I usually write them, they sound like a letter that I would write to someone. I have over 40 poems but I lost them, but don't remember losing them .
Suetang
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4 posted 2005-06-24 12:44 PM


Absolutely beautiful words of love and longing.  Welcome to PIP.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-06-24 12:45 PM


Silky...James
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6 posted 2005-06-24 04:29 AM


a sweet write

love the ending lines

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2005-06-24 01:23 PM


Keith~
Welcome to the pages blue~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2005-06-24 01:30 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Enjoyed your first post!
I hope to read more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine
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9 posted 2005-06-24 01:30 PM


Welcome to Passions, Kurai!  I hope you find this to be the best poet's home you've ever come across!  Please check your e-mail for a special greeting!
suthern
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10 posted 2005-06-24 04:12 PM


Please don't lose any more... for if this is any indication, those are lost treasures. *S* Welcome to Passions... this is beautiful!
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