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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-06-24 08:20 AM


Always Check

Check the birds and trek the bees
And check the wind within the trees
Hear the sound of shadows round
The essence of the new days sound

Watch the flowers raise their heads
To morning’s sun from night of bed
See the grass and river flow
Watch the breakfast of the crow

Smell the odors of the day
See the animals at play
Feel the dew upon your skin
Touch the world that you are in

Let your mind to fly the skies
Let the find to greet your eyes
Fill your heart with this bouquet
And you will have a happy day

I do this greeting every morn
And every morn I am new born


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-06-24 08:24 AM


well, it worked for me, I'm a newbie to, standing here with a very loose, very wet diaper I'm trying to pull up and some gaget with a nipple that I don't know what to do with? Gwad, sure hope it's not goats milk   LOL...you make me feel like dancin Mr. Merlin....



Great poem, thank you

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-06-24 08:38 AM


LeeJ
Just sing out and they will change you. LOL
I don't know about dancing, maybe some kicking. Good morning sweet.  

scorpio
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right...there
3 posted 2005-06-24 08:43 AM


A great morning ritual Sy.  I'll try to follow your example.

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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4 posted 2005-06-24 08:46 AM



Check!

Not only are you newly born...
gracing smiles all over morn,
But with a lift of tone and smile,
you carry us with all your wiles!






Janet Marie
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5 posted 2005-06-24 08:56 AM


Check the birds and trek the bees
And check the wind within the trees
Hear the sound of shadows round
The essence of the new days sound

Watch the flowers raise their heads
To morning’s sun from night of bed
See the grass and river flow
Watch the breakfast of the crow

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

YOU ROCK!!!
gems like this are the reason we read you each morning,
you are constantly cadenced perfection as the dawn.
This was pure poetry in motion read aloud..
you are our rhyme rooster.   lol

*ww*



(will e-ya later about the book)


Earth Angel
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6 posted 2005-06-24 09:59 AM


Check and trek
And hear and watch and see
And smell and touch and feel...

~ and "Let your mind to fly the skies
Let the find to greet your eyes
Fill your heart with this bouquet
And you will have a happy day" ~ Yes, oh, yes!

"I do this greeting every morn
And every morn I am new born" ~ and that, Dear T-Man, is why your spirit is so young!

Thank you for starting my day off so joyously!

Love & Morning Light,
EA
Flowers


Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-06-24 10:14 AM


scorpio
Try it you will like it.

Sunshine
You are a sun within a sun.

JM
Your pictures were wonderful. How did you get all those butterflies to pose? Your comments are the oatmeal of my day. LOL


Earth Angel
Perhaps it's your Angel kiss each morn.

vandana
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8 posted 2005-06-24 10:29 AM


good read
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2005-06-24 10:50 AM


vandana
Thank you dear.

Startime55
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10 posted 2005-06-24 11:20 AM


What a wonderful way to greet the day...I love watching the day begin and always start it with the wild birds flying into my home office and greeting me...I love the vision your words paint...You have taken me today along to greet the day this way also...Love it...*big hugs*

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2005-06-24 11:33 AM


Startime55
Big hugs back and thank you.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
12 posted 2005-06-24 11:42 AM


What a wonderful morning read this is!!!
Hope you have a wonderful day...
and a fantastic weekend Sy!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Martie
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13 posted 2005-06-24 12:06 PM


Sy

What great advice, oh wise one of morning.  I do and will do!  

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2005-06-24 12:15 PM


Martie
I know you do.

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2005-06-24 01:19 PM


Nancy,
Thank you sweety.

iliana
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16 posted 2005-06-24 02:59 PM


Sy, ty....this is getting printed out and, perhaps, I'll make it my new mantra!   .....jo
Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2005-06-24 05:08 PM


iliana
Sounds good to me.

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