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Luna's Whispers
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Luna's Whispers |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Luna's Whispers  Standing on lakeside dock in wait as thickening clouds slowly slipped by, blowing softly were nighttime winds in chilling eve of October skies. In awe of nights splendor we watched Luna performing her special dance held in brilliance of this sight we fixated, becoming entranced. Magical play at waters edge moves with grace of artistic ballets the dance performed to perfection she laughs at clouds obscuring our gaze. Brightly then Luna's smile illuminates across the clearness of autumns eve and with sly wink Luna does whisper "All that you have to do..........is believe" (slightly revised 6-23-05) {repost for a friend who knows all of those magical moments under moonlit skies...  }I really want to care, I want to feel something, let me dig a little deeper nah, still nothing~ my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit, And that is the key "believe" |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit~ Yes ! Yes ! Yes ! I love moon-talk ... this is gorgeous~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was extremely sensual, soft, delicate, thread of understanding woven together to make memory another first....hugs for such a lovely write |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I remember this... and now? It's picture perfect! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
indeed she whispers.....hugsssss you I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Luna... lovely you.. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
La Luna, e bellissima. come a te Bella. (the moon is beautiful, like you Bella) I'm so glad you reposted this beauty, for sharing YOU with us. Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh wow how beautiful! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very beautiful Donna. I know Monday was a full moon.  *bighugs* "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Magical indeed...How you manage to capture so much of the magic makes me ponder that you are one of those rare magical creatures who see with more than the naked eye...Your words share your vision...Your heart shares you soul...I love it for it called my spirit to soar with you....*big hugs* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very beautiful...both poem and picture...thank you! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Brightly then Luna's smile illuminates across the clearness of autumns eve and with sly wink Luna does whisper "All that you have to do..........is believe"" Donna, this is really lovely! ...jo |
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