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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2005-06-23 05:58 PM


I wrote this after reading an
article in the newspaper saying
that there are 26,000 homeless
young people here in Australia
alone.I know it is a worldwide
problem but this article really
hit home just how bad the situation
is, especially here in my homeland.
Through my words I tried to imagine
how life must be for these
lost souls.

* * *

I seek shelter in a doorway
Or sometimes in a park
I find it hard to get to sleep
For I hear voices in the dark

They tell me I'm a loser
In this world I have no place
But no one hears me cry
As the tears stream down my face

I could not possibly return
To the place I once called home
Where I was beaten and abused
I would much rather be alone

People are quick to judge me
They take one look then turn away
They don't understand my situation
That I have nowhere else to stay

How I'd love to be a part
Of a normal family
A place where I'd feel loved
And no harm would come to me

Within the depths of my despair
In the middle of the night
As I suffer here in silence
I am void of love and light

But I must face reality
As I continue to roam
Out here on these streets
Is the place that I call home

21 June 2005

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2005 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-06-23 06:39 PM


Your compassion has been multiplied, Sue, by all those homeless young ones.

Yes, this is everywhere.  It is indeed a "throw away society" in some respects.  In other ways, there is just NO respect taught in homes any more, and kids run off.  OR... Mom and Dad try, logically, legally, morally, to teach their kids right from wrong,...but the kids are swayed by their friends, get off on the wrong foot, and don't know how to say "I was wrong" before it is too late.

I wish we had a way to straighten them ALL out...

You did good, honey.  Thank you.

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2005-06-23 07:01 PM


Needed saying

Bodger

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
3 posted 2005-06-23 10:24 PM


Karilea
It's always so nice to hear from you and I thank you for your thoughts.

Bodger
Thanks for taking the time to read my words.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2005-06-24 12:42 PM


Nice writing...and may they find that someone...James
Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2005-06-24 12:46 PM


Thanks so much for your reply, James.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Tndeer1
Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 87
TN. USA
6 posted 2005-06-24 02:48 AM


Hi,
I'm fairly new to this site but have found it comforting. Your poem is truer than many realize and not only for the younger ones. You said it perfectly yet sad enough I believe it's going to get worse.
God Bless & keep writing.
  

Tndeer1

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2005-06-24 04:22 AM


It is so sad, yes
makes me want to help all of them, and I would if I won the lottery

touching write Sue

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