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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Make it so God forbid I cannot see The morning sun and face of thee The effervescing clings of dew The essence of the wings of you You are my fancies butterfly The gold within a passing sky The emerald green that fills my scene The outer and the in-between The spirit of my phantoms lush The paint within a rainbows blush The odor of a rose in grace The tender of your lace embrace You wake my soul each mornings kiss The sender of a morning’s bliss And take my hand to fly the skies And render love before my eyes God forbid I cannot see The morning sun and face of thee |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The effervescing clings of dew The essence of the wings of you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh how I love the way you do what you do when you do it to it!! You are the Emperor of Rhyme and your dragon aint half bad either...LOL  You consistantly fill these sonnets with so many subtle rhymes of humility, humanity, and wisdom, that you make it look easy. You must be a poet, huh? *L*  *ww*   |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, yes, God forbid indeed! Beautiful words! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
its so nice to be loved and love...and this proves devotion to that purpose...this was beautiful... Morning my friend...wishing you a lovely day down there in Florida |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! This is a wonderful morning read. Hope you are enjoying life in the sunny south. I think you have sent the heat up this way. In the 90's again today.  ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+ With the rising of the sun, ~ As the day has just begun, May your skin be kissed by dew, And your skies be always blue. Your essence is a spirit free, Spanning rainbows forever be. You paint the skies with thy brush pen, You fly above all other men. Tender is your soul of grace, With touch as soft as tatted lace. Your scent is sweet as summer rose, And through your pen your fancy flows. You have the essence of butterfly, Across PiP's blue, your sonnets fly. Your readers wake every morn, To read your sonnets, daily born. To you I send an angel kiss, And blessings for a life of bliss.  +*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+* EA  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done Sy! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Nothing subtle about what you say here. LOL Honeybunch You are a love. Hugs LeeJ And the top of the morning to you. Hugs Nancy, So we'll make it ice tea today. Hugs Earth Angel What is given will be recieved. You are a talented Angel. scorpio, Thank you my friend. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Warp-factor-5, Number One. -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, That's heading for the stars. LOL |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Beautiful... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cloud 9 Thank you so much. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
God listened to heartfelt plea Sending to the sight of thee Glories of creative hands From beauty of many lands Words sing songs within the trees Caressing each one it sees Gentle touch of summer wind When color, sight, sound combined Bright plumage in silent flight Fills the heart with pure delight Lifts the soul to soar above In flights of fantasies love Scents of summer fill the air Flowers bow in prideful flare They dance amid brilliant green In meadows along a stream God listened to heartfelt plea Sending to the sight of thee Your words can't help but inspire a vision to take form in the heart of the reader...Magnificent writing...*big hugs* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ask...  and ye shall receive.  |
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