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Quad_dune Junior Member
since 2005-06-25
Posts 26Ontario ,Canada |
The only thing that you have ever cared for has been ripped from your grasp. Your dream has been crushed no more hope. Like the only thing you have ever wanted ever desired ever wished of having wiped from your very mind. No more hope, no more feelings, you just don’t care anymore. Like there’s nothing to live for but you still feel the need, you still have some hope to go on. Like you’re a dark closet no feelings no more emotions no nothing. Just cob webs and a dry heart. But then many years later you replenish Yourself, your every need, your every desire. But there will always bee that one thing missing, your youth. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's not missing, it's transformed  (at least for me) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
If you enjoyed your youth... it's never missing.. you move on to the next stage of your life, with hopefully fond memories. I understand what you mean though. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, this was a great write for discussion...I think we always have a child within...and hopefully, that is what helps rejuvinate....hugs and many thanks for another great write. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
One never can loose their youth for it can be lived at any time...I never had a youth but today at 50 I am living life like I will never grow up and loving every minute of it...my grandchildren love that I am living my youth as well...Live for today and your youth will live with you...*big hugs* |
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