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Angel Eyes
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Angel Eyes |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Angel eyes, ever bright, Staring off into the night, Gossomer silk as strands of hair, That a zypher breeze stirs with greatest care. With an angel's beauty, and a face so fair, A maiden found to be so rare. A heart is lost to a stranger's grace, Who doesn't know how my heart must race. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
With an agnel's beauty...angel's dosn't doesn't I enjoyed the verses (though you may wish to make a few corrections) M |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Oops, thanks nakdthoughts. I guess that's what I get for writing poetry late at night. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed this |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Your writing has a touch of fantasy to it that I really enjoy!!!! Very nice!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I liked this very much!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
nice stuff dragon keep up the good writes -wolfman |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I must admit I'm a sucker for such poetry as this If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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