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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-06-22 11:06 AM


She is beauty
tracing the edges of life
in her gracefulness

yet she is untamed
and wild, sometimes she is
    stormy eyed.

She is artistic,
her masterpiece
   is her soul
and she captures my essence
on her canvas

lightly brushing
the soft shades,
melding them as one
into waves of tranquility

       she fulfills me

as she offers her breath
to my wanton lips
soothing the burn
          of yesterday

drenching me
        while quenching the thirst
for moments like this
when in her simplicity
I become lost
in the ripples of
endless possibilities...

drifting.
{The right title hasn't caught up with me yet....}


help somebody
if you can,
and get right with the man...Van Zant


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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2005-06-22 11:08 AM


oh gosh this is SO beautiful!!
Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2005-06-22 11:13 AM


  thank you Sea!  that means much to me as it really was just a take off of a morning thought this a.m. Hugs to you
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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2005-06-22 11:23 AM


beautiful canvas Donna....lovely morning thoughts.....   luv ya

I keep a fragrance bottle my
muse gave me when I met him
in endless winter and he
settled me into remembering
who I am.

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-06-22 11:26 AM


wonderfully expressed

morning is my best inspiration....or when I'm driving long distance alone....

very much enjoyed this....simply lovely, soft not the least bit a ramble, more so, intricate prose.  Hugs

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2005-06-22 11:45 AM


Beautiful Donna!!!
Your writing continues to grow in leaps and bounds.
Love ya lady~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2005-06-22 11:57 AM



When the title does...
you'll know...

Soft and gentle, this is.

Juju
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In your dreams
7 posted 2005-06-22 12:33 PM


I like this it reminds me of the sunset in minnesota. OUr sunsets are the best and I have been alot of places.....

-Juju

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The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Dark Angel
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8 posted 2005-06-22 04:30 PM


I feel her stirring, and I see she has a hold of you...and you're drifting...

beautiful m'gentle one.

a

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

littlewing
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New York
9 posted 2005-06-23 01:12 AM


and what a mighty muse she be . . .
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