Open Poetry #35 |
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Artist of Soul(new ramblings) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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She is beauty tracing the edges of life in her gracefulness yet she is untamed and wild, sometimes she is stormy eyed. She is artistic, her masterpiece is her soul and she captures my essence on her canvas lightly brushing the soft shades, melding them as one into waves of tranquility she fulfills me as she offers her breath to my wanton lips soothing the burn of yesterday drenching me while quenching the thirst for moments like this when in her simplicity I become lost in the ripples of endless possibilities... drifting. {The right title hasn't caught up with me yet....} help somebody if you can, and get right with the man...Van Zant |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh gosh this is SO beautiful!! ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful canvas Donna....lovely morning thoughts..... ![]() ![]() I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wonderfully expressed morning is my best inspiration....or when I'm driving long distance alone.... very much enjoyed this....simply lovely, soft not the least bit a ramble, more so, intricate prose. Hugs |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Donna!!! Your writing continues to grow in leaps and bounds. Love ya lady~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When the title does... you'll know... Soft and gentle, this is. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this it reminds me of the sunset in minnesota. OUr sunsets are the best and I have been alot of places..... -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I feel her stirring, and I see she has a hold of you...and you're drifting... beautiful m'gentle one. a ![]() Mxx ![]() "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and what a mighty muse she be . . . |
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