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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-06-22 04:38 AM



Con trails section
skies of luminescent
blue, strange rounded
edged clouds, stuck
to the background,
mackrell alto cumulous,
pewter grey shadows.
Evening sky moving
in rythym with
my heart, slow,
like my heart
empty, nothing moving,
within vast scapes.
Will a craft
cut through to
fill the ear
with lazy droning
sound, casting rescue
parachuttes on it's
way to a
distant destination unknown?

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-06-22 04:48 AM


very vivid and thought provoking write here

froggy
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Michigan
2 posted 2005-06-22 03:27 PM


What Dixie said.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

adagio
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Marrero, La.
3 posted 2005-06-22 07:54 PM


WOW!
this one really does capture my inagination
loved it

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4 posted 2005-06-22 11:49 PM


Fascinating -- this poem reads like a heartbeat! Your presentation alone makes it a pleasure to read.

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