Open Poetry #35 |
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On the Wind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
On the Wind On the wind of mystic awe I send my fantasy to soar In amongst the white of clouds To change them into hues of shrouds To cloak myself in forty greens To lay me down in forty scenes To pull the seven vales apart And show them to my crying heart I feast upon each phase of hew The precious color of it dew Let it sooth my hungers tear And wash away the smell of fear And in the pleasure of their wake I shake the apple of the snake This hungers pang within my soul And once again I reach my goal Surcease of sorrow of my day Balanced in a dreams display |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
it is fear which keeps us from doing and experiencing so many things...once again, you melt my eyes, giving the reader much to ponder, humbly.... Hugs to ya for this and thank you |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done Sy. Keep soaring on those winds of mystic awe. believe in what your heart feels... |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"And in the pleasure of their wake I shake the apple of the snake This hungers pang within my soul And once again I reach my goal" I really liked this part.... says so much for me ![]() |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I always love how you rhyme, I can never get it right lol. _Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
That is beautiful! Nice write. Kristabell |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just keep writing ![]() that's all we ask. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Again your words inspire me to put pen to paper and try to bring alive a dream...Your words do much to touch the soul of all who believe in the magic within our hearts...*big hugs* Thank you, so much, for the vision you brought to life and the words that inspired me to write... |
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