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Open Poetry #35

Could We Capture What Was

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-06-22 08:21 AM

Could We Capture What Was

I am still at the same place
Again wishing upon a star
Hoping dreams come true
As I pondered where you are

Gazing as bright stars glow
Each one sparkling above
The same wishes I repeat
Whispered with words of love

Within every wish I whisper
Its your touch I still yearn
I am so lonely without you
Would my dream ever return

Every loving wish I conveyed
As the stars shone around
I'm wishing with all my heart
A love I lost can still be found

Hoping my wishes will travel
Where loving flames ignite
Could we capture what was
In reaching my dream tonight

Hope ©2005
With music and graphic below
www.thestarlitecafe.com/p...51199.html

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-06-22 09:33 AM

this hits home for me...loved this

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-06-22 10:55 AM

makes for good poetry

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-06-22 11:23 AM

this was beautifully felt, and would really enjoy hearing this put to music...precious words, hugs and best wishes sent for your dreams to come true.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2005-06-22 12:35 PM

I like this poem... its vcery nice

_Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2005-06-22 12:43 PM

Thank you for your kind , caring replies , they are so much appreciated , hope the link with the music and graphics works below

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/91/poem_751199.html

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

6 posted 2005-06-22 01:07 PM

Wow! Your loss is evident, but no one can take your memories...

Kristabell

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2005-06-22 02:01 PM

The stars aren't out yet here but when they come out tonight I will add a wish for you...I hope your wish comes true, Hope...*big hugs*

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