Open Poetry #35 |
Your Turn |
J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
You were my friend When you had every right to leave me alone I took your heart in my hand and crushed it to bits I was so full of anger I lashed out at everyone Including you Especailly you But to me you remained true A true friend I know what I did I remember who I was And I just want to tell you that's not me The anger is gone I'm free To be The friend you need So you can yell at me You can scream Me you can even demean It's your turn now Don't hold it all in Say what you feel Tell me what you mean |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
if this person is really your friend? Then they understand you were going through a rough time. It's not always about taking turns, it's just about being there for each other, and knowing that sometimes, we hurt the ones we love...without meaning to. I hope things go well for you and your friend |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
A friend who will ride out the storms with us is a great value - enjoyed your expression of appreciation- Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
The significance of friendship shows itself in our times of need by opening the doors of communication. Well done! SG |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding this |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jacqueline~ I was moved by this offering~ Friendships are often strongest after they've been tested a time or two~ I think you made a wonderful word-gesture to your friend ... I hope they take you up on it~ (except that they *HUG* you instead of word-lashing out in anger or revenge) Never gets the job done ... does it ? *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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