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Open Poetry #35

Final Day

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

0 posted 2005-06-21 02:24 PM

My heart,
It hurts,
It’s taken over by love.

But why?
I am knew,
Free.

But where are you?
Where is your time?

You are taken,
By your family,
Preoccupied by others,
And now, I need you.
I want you here with me.

I do not mind,
There are things,
We all must do.
So that is why,
I am forgiving you.

The summer is nearing,
And I will be away.

Not by my choice,
I am leaving,
Back there.

You know that place,
Where I suffered so.
I have told you of it,
And you,
You will be away,
With those who care about you.

Accepting one,
And that would be me.

I wish you love,
Happiness.

But my heart weeps,
For our time running short,
Two days left,
And you are already gone.

So much keeps us apart,
And soon,
After summer and a year,
I am going away,
To college where,
I need to be.

I miss you,
Love you,
And I am so afraid,
That tomorrow,
Will be our final day.

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

1 posted 2005-06-21 03:08 PM

It's hard when you want to be with someone but everything seems to be in your way. I understand this. Good write!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-06-21 03:25 PM

Can feel the pull and tug in this Kristabell. Good luck to you.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-06-21 03:28 PM

Sending understanding hugs your way~Nancy

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-06-21 09:05 PM

hang in there sweetie

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

5 posted 2005-06-21 09:11 PM

Thank you everyone.

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