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SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
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0 posted 2005-06-21 12:30 PM


My Turn

Is it my turn
  to touch the dust that stars
    are made of
to dream under the blanket of
    night next to the one I adore
to make something out of nothing
   and feel as if tomorrow I will be reborn

I touch you with anticipation
  and hold my breath
while the static of invisible
   glue binds me to you
it is my turn to hold on
  to the moment of forever
and know that dreams
   do come true...

SG

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-06-21 12:59 PM


"it is my turn to hold on
  to the moment of forever
and know that dreams
   do come true..."

This reminded me of one of my favourite songs..
"It's My Turn"
This is lovely..and so full of promise of good things to come.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-06-21 01:15 PM


I do believe that you have touched star dust and that all your dreams will come true! Stars

Your pen is in fine form, my friend!

Loving hugs,
Linda


scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
3 posted 2005-06-21 01:19 PM


This is sparkling with star dust.  Well done!

believe in what your heart feels...

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
4 posted 2005-06-21 02:42 PM


Cute!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2005-06-21 09:09 PM


oh...this is a good one! yes!
Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
Posts 678
Portland, OR
6 posted 2005-06-21 09:12 PM


This is very sweet. It is definitely your turn!!!

Kristabell

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