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Forever One |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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 Old symbols come pounding through my mind.... chained... pain. Scars furious lucid..... Viscous. Sweet tenderness escaping your gaze holding me.... truth.... Unconditional love. Joy eternally ours connected..... invisible link. Avenue not taken condemned.... real..... daily nightmare of conscience. Strive to follow all moments shared visible.... uncut.... only mine and yours. Promises from my depth unkept..... But meant.... Intentions whole For my twin of soul. "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink [This message has been edited by Justbleu (06-18-2005 11:33 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the format... touching write here |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Promises from my depth unkept..... But meant.... Intentions whole For my twin of soul. I love this. The timing, the silence of space, the wholness of the inbetween says so much more than just the beauty of the words. Well done. SG |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This reminded me so much of the Irish proverb "Still waters run deep" (sigh) Roses are like that to me. They do have thorns, thus it's kind of like those "nightmares of conscience" and "scars", but in all there is that unresistable beauty to the flower of love that makes it all the worthwhile! (angel friendship hugs) I love this, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It is good to see you posting again, my friend... this is excellent! *S* And I love the picture... it reminds me of a rose bush that grew in our front yard when I was a child... I loved its beauty... but it never would let me rescue a ball or a kitten from underneath it without ripping a strip from my hide! LOL |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fabulous...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely Bridgette! Excellent presentation as well. Hugs~Nancy |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Loved all the uncut symbols in your poem! Nicely penned, Justbleu~ |
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ShadowLost Junior Member
since 2001-06-23
Posts 43 |
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