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timothysangel1973
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0 posted 2005-06-18 04:51 AM


Crazy cool air
circles me

each morning
at this time

You are here again
aren't you?

No face
No voice

Just shivers
up my spine


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1 posted 2005-06-18 04:54 AM


you and I have the same feeling...but I had mine all night long

the breeze is kinda cool here...a scary empty strange feeling about it

timothysangel1973
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2 posted 2005-06-18 04:58 AM


I sware to goodness... the houses of my heart are haunted.

Hubby says Im nutts, and I agree, but even still... I know what I feel sometimes in this old house.

Either the house, or the dirt under it has stories to tell

I feel it all the time... and when it's not the breeze, I feel a stare at me - turn and no one is there

If I weren't so desperate for adult conversation... it might scare me

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3 posted 2005-06-23 12:28 PM


When you turn, you focus all your physical senses toward the same thing....and they drown out the one non-physical sense that can perceive what you're trying to find. Next time you feel it, focus without turning any other senses, just concentrate on capturing the impression that's coming to you....then turn, slowly, holding your attention on that other sense. There's nothing to see, but oh so much to see....

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4 posted 2005-06-23 01:34 AM


Heh, you been to my house, haven't you?
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