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on elfin feet |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
in clogs on elfin feet morning dances across your shoulder, I kiss you just there |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I don't know but wouldn't that kinda hurt? clogs? The way I dance, anyone around me would get hurt if I were wearing clogs, lol Now if the elf was wearing those soft pointy-toed slippers, then it would be nice  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That's very lovely. Dixie's remark made me wonder, so I went to see what clogs are and found out ... well they are wooden mostly I guess and on elfin's feet they move lightly and can lift up on a shoulder, where ... the knock is felt ... with or without clogs ... this morning's dance is magical .. so lovely! Love, Margherita |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Wonderful read. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Wow I like this alot! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Beautiful.....but oh what I'd give for those two lost syllables.....I wonder where the elves have hidden them? ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It's quite a dancer who can remain light on her feet while wearing clogs--and that you do, lady. |
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