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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Gone, the thick ice blinds the harbor from any hint of moon, no rescue dare come tonight, the seccession of color will not part the way to the locked up sea, and a requiem plays, suffocating the stars that the fainthearted swallowed, gone and unreachable, in memory now, to the abyss, his whereabouts imparted. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-17-2005 01:32 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you have the most wonderful way with words Michelle. Enjoyed this much. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ gone, but not forgotten. So many things live on through your beautiful poetry...   Linda |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a painting.....I can see it.....multidimentional through your eyes. ......jo |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love the way you tell the story in your poetry, Michelle. It's beautiful. hugs, Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and a requiem plays, suffocating the stars that the fainthearted swallowed, sad, but beatifully felt....and the power house sentance in this is That the fainthearted swallowed... |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Beautifully and poignantly painted...
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow girl awesome piece |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Michele...simply lovely. Hugs~ In the midst of winter, |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Gone" yes, but not forgotten... "in memory now," The hold on the harbor is temporary, ice breaks with the coming of spring And the moon will glisten diamonds on the waves Again as if a remembered dream.. and you will go forth renewed Like the unlocked sea. enjoyed, inky....  __________ice/ford ><> |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for taking the time to stop by |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"and a requiem plays, suffocating the stars that the fainthearted swallowed" love that...you just get better and better.  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Red Dreams Member
since 2005-01-09
Posts 90massachusetts |
that's very pretty and dream-like. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
a dark feel to this - well done - moody SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
 Enjoyed this different side of you |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
the seccession of color will not part the way to the locked up sea ... nice... very nicely done... muchly enjoyed... regards sudhir |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
gone too are the fall leaf hues a memory to the grip of Montreal's sleet coated by overcast skies..enjoyed |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
and a requiem plays, suffocating the stars that the fainthearted swallowed, gone and unreachable, in memory now, This touches me very much. I'm glad I looked back and found this. SG |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks simply for bringing this back, made me feel it all over again |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes, thank you. I'd missed it, and now I have a second chance. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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