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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2005-06-17 03:52 PM


All they gave me to kiss the night

was one final breath

A lifetime to leave

and all heartache to cry

in my one final breath

As i feel it slip away i hold it

and once again feel it as mine

My one final breath

Just one final breath

Then just lay me down  

Take a good look at my face
Well, don't my smile look out of  place
look a little closer its easy to trace
The tracks of my tears

© Copyright 2005 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2005-06-17 04:23 PM


Well now,  look who I come in and find on this fine day... hey Paul...
And I see you havent lost your touch for writing bittersweet beautys and gems of your soul....you were always the poetic prince of melancholy masterpieces ...
good to see your name on the blue my friend.

Dont give up on me ... I'm about to come alive ...

Train

Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2005-06-17 04:26 PM


You do meloncholy very well....

An emotion I know and understand.

Very nice!!!!!

Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink


Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
3 posted 2005-06-17 04:49 PM



I like your style. It is very cool.  keep posting

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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