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Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-06-13 03:57 AM

sunday voice#1

come with me to a field
of wildflowers-where
red & purple quilt
our passion
-take these breasts
-swallow this breath
-hold my tired heart

come with me
to our bed -
of red & purple

6/12/05 sdt

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

[This message has been edited by Snow (06-13-2005 11:49 PM).]

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2005-06-13 05:03 AM

A poem of gentleness...and one of peaceful love..

Thank you

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

2 posted 2005-06-13 09:13 PM

I've read this a couple times today...each time I meant to comment on it...but was dragged away upon other errands. The rest of the world is just going to have to wait on me though...because I darn well mean to tell you I think this is wonderful. It is a poem that has been itching at my mind since 4:30 AM. That is a sign of great poetry...if it imprints upon the mind after the first casual glance...it is great...and I care not what other people have to say. It reminds me of The Iceberg Theory by Gerald Locklin. Not so much in the wording, nor in the subject matter, but rather in the emotion it instilled. Bravo Snow!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2005-06-13 09:32 PM

GR.. thank you for your thoughts.

~~

Kevin, having you comment to my work again means more to me than i can say. you've always been one to pick my work apart and find the little things about it that get to the heart of the matter ... i trust what you say and i know that if you thought it sucked you'd say so (in email lol)
thank you for everything.. and more. always. S~

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2005-06-14 07:20 AM

a lovely bed created

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2005-06-14 09:24 AM

hold my tired heart....

The whole is incredibly beautiful... but these words... they touched this heart deeply. *S*

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2005-06-14 11:16 AM

1 followed by 2 ..I can feel your words in my own heart...and am looking forward to number 3

M

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

7 posted 2005-06-14 11:42 AM

I like this.

-Juju

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2005-06-14 12:19 PM

words cannot convey, the beauty and profound moment this brings to the reader...simply lovely!

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

9 posted 2005-06-17 09:12 AM

A challenge from Ed -- spend a moment today, thinking about how we should treat a good person who is one of PiP's finest poets....if not this one, then one of your choice....it seems we need to.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2005-06-17 07:41 PM

Tempting...James

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