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Open Poetry #35

Duck, Duck, Duck...

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2005-06-17 09:36 AM

patterned beauty lines
patting soft behinds
winking to the left
yet 'neath it all we find
phillies in a race
jones' keeping pace
tho not a one will win
wipe the egg with grace

unspoken form and ban
stone walling dirty hands
horses high, no poles
isn't winter grand?
chill-factoring at zero
violin like nero
foolish game of chance
damsels minus hero

reapers grim what sown
true intent unknown
tis but a glaring blue
where fingers set the tone
both eye and body dark
deep waters swimming sharks
a territorial fest
no weary for the rest

pattern beauty lines
pat yours if you pat mine
try winking to the right
perhaps we'll all be fine

~tier

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

1 posted 2005-06-17 06:58 PM

"pat yours if you pat mine"

goose

I loved this, tier!

**baby

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2005-06-17 09:33 PM

Hugs to you, Baby Girl!

~tier

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2005-06-17 10:55 PM

I'll be forever amazed by people who can write with rhyme....and not be stifled by it.

A beauty, Tier

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

4 posted 2005-06-17 10:58 PM

Glad I stopped in! I agree with wranx. You do this so well!

miscellanea

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-06-18 05:40 AM

cool write!!

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