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Twilight Rose Garden |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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sitting in both past & present, listening smiles to a renoir’s girl with the watering can painting the center of whole while a flux of tarot cards helps me find stalactite droppings where great prodigies push my heart & life to undergo human scenic wonders moon cakes on a collision with music and we weave and weave even though we talk like strangers we become fruit and cerulean water i, the focus of some division of seasons, tossing wine riddled thermals into the air you paint a face on childhood while towns folk, turn out to hear something about a special diet from the great sphinx leafy hums awaken magnolia dreams short-circuiting a friend of a friend into a secret’s total gesture we linger once again… where distance opens with a hollowed name and the savor of gathering each other again writing new letters connected with the old ones becomes a ravishing relic we hear fireworks in the background and i realize great meaning in that moist spring picnic under a scented rose garden arbor in allentown God I loved you.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ This was a delight to read. Good morning sweet. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and we weave and weave … we hear fireworks in the background and i realize great meaning in that moist spring picnic under a scented rose garden arbor in allentown ~*~ I want to visit you someday... and weave. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I do love the way you write!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This..... we hear fireworks in the background and i realize great meaning in that moist spring picnic under a scented rose garden arbor in allentown God I loved you.... made me s igh. *smile* mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
What a wonderful read this was.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
This was so wonderful my friend from beginning to end Hope |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, YES, LeeJ, your muse sure WAS tugging! (Library clicked).  ....jo |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
You weave beauty and love into a vision of delight...Powerful feelings need a painting like the one this poem presents to express itself...Stunning...*big hugs* |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lee - you take the reader on magical journeys each and every time ... and I love them. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh, how you are possessed by the great beats . . . |
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