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Open Poetry #35

Eutopia

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

0 posted 2005-06-16 09:16 PM

Angel kisses sweep over
Sunshine glistens on grass so green
Soft touch of beauty
Meaningless glance of contempt
Early morning singing
Love is tickling everyone
Perfect earth
Smiles so wide
Hands connected
Beings so gifted
Wishing comes true
Always means always
Forever
Is
Forever

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-06-16 09:21 PM

"Wishing comes true
Always means always
Forever
Is
Forever"

yes, that would be nice

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2005-06-16 09:30 PM

Nice...James

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

3 posted 2005-06-17 10:42 AM

yep, imagine that forever is forever.
enjoyed
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2005-06-17 06:46 PM

logic tell's me 'impossible', but then stranger things have happened. and, it is nice to dream

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2005-06-17 07:05 PM

I like the last four stanza's. I also like poems about happy places. I have one. Naps on the roof of a mexican villa... yes what sweat serenness is the felling of the warm roof on my back and the sun on my skin...................................................................... Ah you made me smile.

(: -Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-06-17 08:05 PM

This is lovely Sara..
so full of hope and promise.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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