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Suetang
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0 posted 2005-06-13 10:42 PM




A gentle breeze brushes my face
As I sit here and write
Whispy clouds adorn the sky
But they don't block out the light

I am immersed in peace and quiet
Only the birds make a sound
This place I come to often
Where inspiration can be found

My skin soaks up the rays of sun
As I pen my words in rhyme
Here I am in my own world
And I lose all track of time

I've much to be grateful for
Each day, for love, I strive
As I embrace all that I have
It feels so good to be alive


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-06-13 10:43 PM


Amen!

beautiful!

froggy
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2 posted 2005-06-13 10:55 PM


Beautiful words,
picture is too.

:-)

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Goodknight
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3 posted 2005-06-14 07:46 PM


thanks for the poem Sue - Paul
Suetang
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4 posted 2005-06-14 11:46 PM


Thank you for your kind replies.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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5 posted 2005-06-15 01:00 PM


A very special poem...beautifuly written.

Eric

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6 posted 2005-06-15 01:18 PM


Sue~
It's SO good to see you and read this lovely penning~

NICE photo, gal ... ~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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Suetang
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7 posted 2005-06-15 05:43 PM


Eric & Marge

Thank you so much for your lovely replies.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

SmartChick
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8 posted 2005-06-16 11:07 PM


Beautiful Sue! Absolutely beautiful!
Suetang
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9 posted 2005-06-17 02:17 AM


Hello Sue

Thank you so much for your lovely reply.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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10 posted 2005-06-17 10:44 AM


very nice
bernie

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11 posted 2005-06-17 01:20 PM


Those beautiful little special places....

Very nice!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink


Suetang
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12 posted 2005-06-17 07:47 PM


Thank you both for your kind words.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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