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As Night Dies
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As Night Dies |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City 
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As Night Dies “speak now, or nevermore” tell me again you love me, drawl the vowels, redlit ‘neath the tongue’s clay pit, receding, the secret thresholds sprawl their tremors over the haunch, descending into my spine, you hold all the currents of a river, at bay, in pangs, as I lay on absence, a lullaby, under the tides of a white, frozen moon, closing the wounds a quiver in the inner equilibrium, rippling, the brute bulk of jaws, as you cradle a keep in the taupe arms of July, I, all in butterscotch swatches of soil,longing for the fruit of all this giving, all in glass, amber rasps against a lit emptiness, and in the house blooms, a hoaxer’s garden of votive bouquets and bridegrooms, taken for granted in this scant slant of light, as I wait as I wait, as I wait, in the swan arch of doorways, dovewhite, the bow-legged certainty of the body, burgeons, its battered ecstasy, an agony you heal with solely a kiss, the clock slows, so far from midnight, this longing dovetails through the sandglass in tantrums, racked all in black a-gain, as night dies on my lips. 2005 copyright babygirLPress **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
as you cradle a keep in the taupe arms of July, ~*~  lines, for sure! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
of the body, burgeons, its battered ecstasy, an agony you heal with solely a kiss, the clock slows, so far from midnight, this you collapse me with these lines... amazing how healing one kiss slowed in time and held in midnight can bring such bliss... I love the way you write.  I really want to care, |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Gentle Spirit~ (((thank you))) the admiration is mutual, my friend... bliss is a concept...I am only just learning how to release... much love, **baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Sunshine~~ thanks love, for looking in on me~ much love, **baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whoa, how could any man resist? well done lady jane, extremely tense, profound and powerful!!!! |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
LeeJ~ lol...thanks for the looksee~~~ **baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
What words are there after that! I am in awe. I yield to your words, M'Lady. Beautifully written...feelings astonishgly evoked. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just found another image that stayed with me most of the day... quote: and every time I thought of it... well, um...  |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
yv~thank you for such a warm reply...so glad you enjoyed this.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sunshine... ummmmmmm yeah....I'm feeling you... lol.... thanks for the peek~ **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
My God, sounds like an angel in wait for her prince . . . |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A sensual flow of tender desire fills this poem with amazing beauty...I love it...*big hugs* |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Baby Girl, truly, you blow me away... awesome! ~tier |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
James littlewing start and Tier~~~~~ thank you all for stopping in for a looksee...your love & support is deeply felt & appreciated.~~~ **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
in the swan arch of doorways, dovewhite, the bow-legged certainty of the body, burgeons, its battered ecstasy, an agony you heal with solely a kiss, the clock slows, so far from midnight, this longing dovetails through the sandglass in tantrums, racked all in black a-gain, as night dies on my lips. babygirl, the ending is sad , have a hug baby much love ~wolfie |
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