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Luka, Woman of My Heart
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Luka, Woman of My Heart |
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MiniGuitarMan Junior Member
since 2002-09-01
Posts 26Florida |
Luka, Woman of My Heart -Bill Haight- In nightly vigil she comes to me peaceful keep of soul is she Little Cherokee princess, mine my Luka, the strongest heart of all womankind. With warmth and affection she lets me know I am the man she chooses, for it is so. Lets me hold her in strong arms knowing I will keep her from harm. She softly smiles and calls my name knowing she has my heart Forever I will cherish her for never will we part. This world is but the place of begin we will journey forth, far past the end of this earthly plane, as we know it to be my precious Luka, ... and me. Okay so I'm not the greatest poet in the world, and I had to ask your help in getting this thing to look right, but Marge Tindal, my Luka I adore you. Happy Valentines Day, sweetheart. -Bill- |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Simply AWESOME!!! What a lovely heart write for such a beautiful woman as our Marge. Best Wishes, TD |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
SMILING here what a wonderful treat! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sooooooooooooooo sweet |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Awwwww, Bill!! This is a wonderful gift to my Marge/sis! The sencerity behind the words is so very touching. Welcome!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So good to see you here, and this is so beautiful for our Marge! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is one very lovely Valentine, Bill, to a very lovely lady! Corinne |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
WOW, Bill, this is the most romantic Valentine poem. We all love your Luka.  ....jo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When the love is this sincere, the true poetry is in each smile you give, each gentle touch, each gaze that lingers long on the one so loved. *S* But... you found the words, too. *S* This is beautiful, Bill... What a gift you've written for Marge... welcome to Passions! *S* |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
What a beautiful vaentine you have written for your valentine, sweet Marge. thanks for sharing, and welcome to PIP. Hugs,  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Wow! Blessed Luka! Poetry from the heart is by far the best. Deb |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I think you are a fine poet. Marge is going to love this. This is a wonderful valentines poem for your sweetheart. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh Bill~ I 'finally' found my voice ... through the misty-eyed moments of thanking you ... to reading and re-reading this sweetest of Valentine gifts~  I KNOW of your Luka through your talk-in-your-sleep nights and with you sharing the dreams in the light of the morn~ How much Luka loves you ... yes, MY POET ... any man that can write and sing the beautiful songs that you do ... can sure do justice with poetic words~ I LOVE YOU with the all of me Thank you, babe~ And thank you for all of our precious moments together ... *smiling* here ... yes, you 'Color My World' And right now it's as rosy as rosy can be~ Me wub you too~ Awwwwww ...~ *Huglets* ~*Your Luka*~ *Welcome to Passions* ... you ARE PASSION~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions good read |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling man, now this is exceptional writing, and the beauty of it makes me smile, and YOUR Luka is worth the effort I know I love it utterly, utterly, utterly, hope you both had a wonderful Valantine's Day  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Bill, I am blown away by the love and caring you have for our beloved Marge. She is one very special lady; and one who has been in my heart for many years. Love and hugs to you both. Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Absolutely beautiful! You are so lucky to have a man that shares your talent as well as your heart. Love, Betty |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
What a wonderful poem to such a special lady! A pleasure to read... miscellanea |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Awwwwwwwwww!! So awesome! Bill, it's good to read you here. Wondered who that man behind Marge's words were... and now that I read, I know why she wrote those things. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
absolute belief of many....she is a valentine...thank you for writing and sharing. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Great one! JL |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is soo lovely....great big awwwwwwwww This is awesome. Such a romantic thing to do! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bill, welcome aboard the PiP ship! Your poem was lovely beyond words! ~~~~ and Marge, not only do I love you, Delaney and Landry ~ I now love Bill!!!  You are all beautiful people! ~ and your Bill is one in a million! ~ no, a gazillion! I am so happy for you both! Gush all you want, girlfriend! You deserve to be loved like that! Big hugs for all of you! Linda  |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
What a grand entry! Touching words for a beautiful heart. Marge deserves an uplift, but only you could do such a fantastic one in such style. My husband and I met 52 years ago Valentine's Day and yesterday our new great grand daughter came into the world. May your love last eternally. Rae |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What a beautiful entrance to Passions you have made here Bill!! And, our dear Margie gal deserves all the love you give to her. Welcome, I hope to see more of your work soon. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Aweeeeeeee you are one lucky lady to be loved with such passion and honesty. You are one of the riches women in the world... I hope you know it...because this kind of love can't be bought. It's to be cherished forever. Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~)) |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
A beautiful gift Marge, enjoy. Nice work Bill. marty |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Bill: What a wonderful gift you have given your Luka! Thanks for sharing it with us and there's not a thing wrong with your poetic talents, as well as the others you possess, which Marge has often mentioned. It's heart warming to be able to share the love you have for each other. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Bill, this was so lovely for such a lovely woman. She is so very special to all of us. You did an awesome job. Look forward to reading more. Welcome to Passions. Jules |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
No worries, fella...you done good! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Hey....Hey.... Mz. Marge. This fella is a keeper. So tender and lovely these words you have written on these pages of blue. Hugs coming from Ohio BonBon  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
welcome to pip  marge your a very lucky and ~blessed lady~ Bill, i can feel her smile all the way to calilfornia, ~bless you~ |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Bill This is very touching and heartfelt. A lovely poem and very deserving for Marge. She is such a wonderful lady. By the way, what is 'Luka'? I'm from 'Down Under' and I am not familiar with that term. Isobel |
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MiniGuitarMan Junior Member
since 2002-09-01
Posts 26Florida |
Now I know that I'm supposed to come in and say a big thank you to you all. And I do. Marge is My Luka, her spirit is always in my dreams and in my every waking hour. Luka is the name of the princess of my life. Luka, I love you. Love, Bill |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yessirreee Bob ~ er, Bill! Your Luka is one lucky little princess!   EO |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely words, Bill your mutual love shows~~ hugs M |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Fabulous write, Bill. Welcome to Passions. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
AMAZING WRITE BILL! What a way to start off your membership to passions than with a beautiful poem like this! WELCOME!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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MiniGuitarMan Junior Member
since 2002-09-01
Posts 26Florida |
Just stopping by, after too long a time away, to say a hearty thank you to each of you for the nice things you had to say. Marge, want to go to Daytona Beach tonight and just celebrate our love? Meet you in the driveway at 7? LOVE YOU MY LUKA -Bill |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 Just on account of ... my heart is so full~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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