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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-06-15 08:18 AM


The Seeker

The needle of her word sews cloth
That warms me like a cup of broth
But never can I catch the light
That heats the broth within the night

A phantom of my fantasy
A condiment of ecstasy
The road and rainbows treasured goal
That fills the pool within my soul

I’m taken on the wind to sea
Following stars that sing to me
Blindly do I search forever?
Within my souls search endeavor

Be it here or ghostly dim
Eternity is still my whim
I will not stop until I find
The magic that is in my mind

The journey that’s within this rhyme
Or journey that be future time



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MGROVES
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1 posted 2005-06-15 08:30 AM


the journey through life is hard enough
at times, but the hardest is the journey through one's own mind, heart, soul, and spirit, of coming together as one with them, then any journey which the seeker,seeks,   shall be found

  and if not, at least you can feel at peace with yourself,  lol

   good morning sir, have a glorius day

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2005-06-15 08:44 AM


I will not stop until I find
The magic that is in my mind

The journey that’s within this rhyme
Or journey that be future time


me too, I'll join you in the seek~~


M

scorpio
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3 posted 2005-06-15 08:47 AM


Sy you do travel well.  I enjoyed this very much.

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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4 posted 2005-06-15 08:54 AM


Be it here or ghostly dim
Eternity is still my whim
I will not stop until I find
The magic that is in my mind

~*~

A beautiful promise, Sy...
portending glorious times to come!

You ARE Magic!

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2005-06-15 09:26 AM


MGROVES
The filigree of your write
Is magic in my sight.

Maureen,
We are but two of the many.

scorpio,
Thank you my friend.

Sunshine
And you are a love.

suthern
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6 posted 2005-06-15 02:42 PM


I will not stop until I find
The magic that is in my mind

And that's a worthwhile quest indeed! *S* Beautiful work, my friend!

Honeybunch
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7 posted 2005-06-15 04:15 PM


"I will not stop until I find
The magic that is in my mind"

and then there's no stopping because magic is unlimited - it can go on forever if one learns the tricks.  Good write - thanks.


serenity blaze
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8 posted 2005-06-15 04:31 PM


smiling wide...

and there is magic there, sy.


Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2005-06-15 05:57 PM


suthern
You ae a dear,

Honeybunch
You are very sweet, thank you.

serenity,
Panning for magic is like panning for gold.
Finding either one can make you rich.

Startime55
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10 posted 2005-06-15 06:00 PM


With words of beauty seek it out
Among the stars we know about
This magic weave within your mind
A vision shared is what you'll find

Your words are inspiring and magical...consistantly you weave words that delight both heart and soul...you are loved by so many and so it should be for you share magic daily with us all...thank you...*big hugs*

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2005-06-15 06:04 PM


Startime55
Could not ask for a better reply, thank you

Margherita
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Eternity
12 posted 2005-06-15 06:06 PM


I’m taken on the wind to sea
Following stars that sing to me
Blindly do I search forever?
Within my souls search endeavor


You do search so beautifully, why stop searching!?

We are meant to be seekers, treasures are there for us to be found.

Don't you ever tire to search, dear Seymour, because your discoveries open many eyes.

Love and hugs.
Margherita


Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2005-06-15 07:18 PM


Margherita
You are a dear and I will keep searching.

iliana
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14 posted 2005-06-16 01:44 PM


Sy, you inspire all seekers with your writing!   ......jo
Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2005-06-16 02:40 PM


iliana
I love flattery. LOL

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