Dawn Through a Willow (shadorma #4)

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Open Poetry #35

Dawn Through a Willow (shadorma #4)

Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-04-13 02:53 AM

Dawn Through a Willow

Wildflower;
we hold night back 'neath
whispers &
fragile hearts
until morning gently asks
"will you...marry me?"

©sdt'05
shadorma #4

photo©willow

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

1 posted 2005-04-13 09:25 AM

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-04-13 09:38 AM

Beautiful Snow....just beautiful.
hugs, Chris

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-04-13 09:40 AM

BEAUTIFUL Snow, this is stunning!

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2005-04-13 09:43 AM

Snow
A lovely metaphor.

Aleta
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since 2005-04-17

Posts 102
Louisiana

5 posted 2005-04-18 03:21 PM

Beautiful poem, the willow reflecting the delicate feminine sway… a tree of dreaming and emotions. How well you capture the spirit of such by poem, by picture...

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2005-06-14 10:28 PM

Beautiful...simply beautiful.

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2005-06-16 03:33 PM

Hello everyone

Snow has requested that I leave a "thank you" note on her poetry to all that have read and replied. She is not ignoring anyone...sadly, she cannot post right now.

Snow, you are missed. I do hope you will return soon.

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