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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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You come from the ocean I dare not follow to The rivers in your mind -I can still taste the salt- I'm dancing in your hands Like sand, will I slip through? so we blame origin -the truths are in our faults- I come from the desert protected by mountains substanance can be found even where there's no rain I wonder if you'll look Or find luck in a fountain for enough happyness... Wonder... if we'd sustain -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yup, sustain you would uhhhh huh...see that, I have faith in you, and so should you... Hugs enjoyed this a lot |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
YEah, I wonder if the poem was weakened by the way it was kind of repeated though... -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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