Winter's Nocturne (shadorma #3)

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Snow

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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-04-12 08:18 PM

Winter's Nocturne

night's secret;
in the curve of S
against the
edge of lace
perfumed simplicity wills
finger-spoke, soft_ oohs

©sdt'05
shadorma #3

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

EvocativeVerse2
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1 posted 2005-04-12 08:46 PM

Love this. Makes me burn with yearning and desire. Come-hither and let me show you! (Wink!)

Corinne
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state of confusion

2 posted 2005-04-12 09:27 PM

Lovely, Snow!

Corinne

Midnitesun

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Gaia

3 posted 2005-04-12 09:41 PM

how beautiful!

Juju
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In your dreams

4 posted 2005-04-12 09:45 PM

How wonderful this poem is.

Juju

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passing shadows
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displaced

5 posted 2005-04-13 03:46 AM

very beautiful

Goldenrose
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6 posted 2005-04-13 06:04 AM

Your words always feel like they mean so much to you...that is why i like this so much..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2005-04-13 03:06 PM

last line is brilliant!

bravo!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise

8 posted 2005-04-13 06:32 PM

Loved this! The graphic is beautiful.

hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

SEA

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with you

9 posted 2005-04-13 08:22 PM

very delicate, softly sensual and very beautiful

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2005-04-14 07:32 AM

you collapse me with your talent m'lady....

this is simply put,
lovely!

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Ratleader

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11 posted 2005-06-14 12:49 PM

Gently....gently....and so well.

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Pilgrimage
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12 posted 2005-06-14 01:16 PM

I like the photo, and the way the words look against it. And 'finger-spoke' --excellent image there.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

bslicker

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state of mind

13 posted 2005-06-14 01:45 PM

beautiful

bernie

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