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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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twilight touches my arm in a swimming pool sort of way smirking ocean waves drawing me once more into a world beyond there was no disappointment here only an open door and a page with distinguishing character upon my heart there you stand, in the distance ingeniously laid out free lancing footsteps of aqua marinade remarkably unraveling time a moment in silence ensued greenish tinged skin coverlet of immovable filament embroiled in physical shape, the sound of your voice assuming intimacy, far better then i could imagine representing all sides of unrelenting suspense focused and multi tasking could i? could i take that first step? towards you.. you smiled, as if to say the doors open night time’s camera bobbing a moment touching my spirit so perfectly timed like overwhelmings odds standing at attention for us…. what, in utter silence could be more alive then the groundswells of nature so perfecting reflecting some chosen moment in my life, in yours? i examine the slightest tinge of this granite twilight rising in intensity we have sacrificed enough haven’t we? now, all we see, is predawn light tinted across an eastern sky our eastern sky where we embrace and climb flooding with sea water gradual wakefulness beckons to plow the uttermost inter personal self….. and it is then, we realize what everyone searches for why we are chosen what we desire.. pressing my nose against a moist monday morning window i realize some promise of life’s expose~ it is the dreams & the dreamer that keep our breath unimaginable for that one moment held close to my breast lifetime smiles [This message has been edited by LeeJ (06-14-2005 08:12 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ingeniously laid out free lancing footsteps of aqua marinade remarkably unraveling time a moment in silence ensued very nicely penned Lee. Good morning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aqua marinade... Dang... There you are, girl. Where've you been? I've been missing you. [Exiting, mumbling something about wonderful writers and their sense of discombobulating words into something magical...] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You met a meerman and I enjoyed your frolic. Good morning sweet. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Dreamer, please keep on dreaming ~ and sharing your dreams! They are fascinating! "free lancing footsteps of aqua marinade" ~ You come up with the coolest turns of phrase! Have a sunny day and a starlit night!  Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"pressing my nose against a moist monday morning window i realize some promise of life’s expose~ it is the dreams & the dreamer that keep our breath unimaginable for that one moment held close to my breast lifetime smiles" Beautiful beautiful writing Lee!!! Wow! So many spectacular lines here. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the twilight draws yes, and all life smiles loving this colorful cornucopia |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hi Lee J this is just beautiful....hugsss you I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ The richness of your poetic thoughts enriches me~ 'granite twilight rising in intensity' Such original thoughts sprinkled through this magnificent piece ... *gift* my day~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ It takes courage to open and close doors. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Not going to pick out any special lines ...I enjoyed it all !!! Hope |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked this one Lee J Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
enjoyed bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A sensual pleasure to read...James |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"it is the dreams & the dreamer that keep our breath unimaginable" The punchline of the poem, in my mind... excellent... -----------ice ><> |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and it is then, we realize what everyone searches for why we are chosen what we desire.. pressing my nose against a moist monday morning window i realize some promise of life’s expose~ it is the dreams & the dreamer that keep our breath unimaginable for that one moment held close to my breast lifetime smiles you write poems within poems...and today they all touch me~~ M You are staying cool, I hope  |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
LeeJ~ **running my fingers over such finely pleated words*** wow **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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