Open Poetry #35 |
Of One Soul |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Of One Soul Glad-stones hear the heel of time, where a confluence of spring waters, soon to find their eternal home where salt shall trans their form, and there, here, In the burrow of hunger, the ferns run on the wind, emptying themselves of seed, for the earth fed them well, and I sit against this tree, my own hunger soon to be sated, with a mating of one soul. ~*~ Once again, with a little help from the Muse at http://www.webcom.com/wordings/artofwrite/poetrygenerator.html |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
ohhhhh damn....this one runs deep... much enjoyed, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"In the burrow of hunger, the ferns run on the wind" Just beautiful, Sissie!! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is wonderful Karilea.....agreeing it runs deep! I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wull, LOL, I believe you generate your muse...this was stunning, as your heart and smile...lovely work Lady...simply beautiful! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh wow, this is wonderful Karilea! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
beautiful Sunshine bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Meaningful, short, and wonderfully done. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I dont think your muse is a far gone as you think...playing hard to get perhaps... but certainly not gone...this lush lovely write is proof of that...loved your vocab too. Cool site..thanks for sharing. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'll be wanting to read this one again. Just thought you should know, you dropped a rather substantial pebble into my thought stream tonight. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
In the burrow of hunger, the ferns run on the wind, just beautiful Kari. mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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