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Otaku
Junior Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 39
Western Australia

0 posted 2005-06-13 07:26 AM

Rose Petals

Time will take away the
Petals of this rose
With each breeze of wind,
With each dying sun...

Our memories together will one day, too, be
Taken away.

Until then,
I am the prisoner of your heart.

Take these petals away...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2005-06-13 08:24 AM

So sad ~ yet so romantic! A little gem of a poem!

Love & Light,
EA

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-06-13 10:44 AM

Otaku~

Speak the rose ... you call me in~
Poignant thoughts~

*Huglets*:hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2005-06-13 10:49 PM

Absolutely beautiful!

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

4 posted 2005-06-13 10:53 PM

sweet but sad.
I like this one.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2005-06-13 11:02 PM

I love roses and I love this poem.
It is so beautiful.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

6 posted 2005-06-14 05:23 AM

This is romantic BECAUSE it is sad...i enjoyed it...but then i should..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

7 posted 2005-06-14 11:44 AM

I like this poem.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2005-06-14 12:17 PM

Our memories together will one day, too, be
Taken away.

this is a beautiful poem...but as much as I forget things, I don't forget those important people who were instrumental in bringing me to this day, no, I don't believe she'll forget, nor you her, never...

Hugs

youcan'tseeme
Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 88

9 posted 2005-06-14 02:03 PM

nice write

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