Open Poetry #35 |
Tuesday |
LenMcC1 Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 68 |
Tuesday I met you in the park Alone and traveling in the dark The way the world is meant for me Amazing how spilt wine Creates a passage in time That will forever be in my dreams A blinded smile A bleeding hand One wonders what forces might be at play A simple question Leads to a digression That no one is prepared to say Bergman is what attracted us The shadows and the lonely lust Such a serendipitous confrontation Imaginations and libations Nothing more than a simple human lie But a lie is good if you know you should Suddenly you were taken from me Your aura, your dreams, your delicacy Our eyes met while frozen in time Your tears spoke volumes But I could not cry Cold to everything in the sky Tuesday was my final day At least that is what my heart would say Her existence forever pervades my mind A challenge that grows with passing time Happiness understands the dreams of regret But I only understand the day that we met |
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Otaku Junior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 39Western Australia |
touching, especially now that I still miss my ex-girlfriend after breaking up with her 6 months ago. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
quote: Especially poetic ~ and moving... EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful piece of work...much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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