Open Poetry #35 |
Midsummers Touch |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Light softly shines across the stillness as silhouettes reflect wet shimmers a midsummers touch and she shivers when greeting the banks with fingertips entwined reaching under silvery skies still damp with the dew of two uniting under morning hues. Silence is broken only by the low moans of her rhythmic swaying in orchestrated waves of motion. Mesmerizing, she is in lulling song of captivating sighs the winds, alone can hear her crying she shudders in ecstasy dancing in veils of blue on blue where sky meets sea her shadows forever will be haunting me {for you m'friend... } and life for me ain't been no crystal stair Langston Hughes [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-10-2005 12:30 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, The odor takes a special yield When smelling flowers in the field. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
*cough* yes. I think I need something... great work on this Donna!!! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's a good thing everyone thinks this is for them... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks Sey and Susan, and happy Friday. My desire to visit the sea again keeps her memories fresh in my mind... she is almost a haunting of beauty that can't be forgotten. I so appreciate you both. Hugs. I really want to care, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah Kari, you slipped in there. But you know the sea, she holds my dreams and heart.... lol. Sometimes I swear I can hear her whispering across the miles. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
m'gentle one, this is really very beautiful and this..... Silence is broken only by the low moans of her rhythmic swaying in orchestrated waves of motion. simply stunning smiling atchoo Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm..this is so lovely Donna.. much enjoyed sweet lady. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A sensual natural Touch, dear Donna. Impressive work. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To read this one more time, in different light, under auspicious means... is to breath deep, and know, again. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I wonder how many words have been written of such a simple, yet beautiful sight, sound and feel? You have done admirably well. Thanx Donna. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks to all of you m'friends..... peace. I really want to care, |
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