Open Poetry #35 |
sudden grace |
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I want -so suddenly- to say a grace this food is normal fare the setting ordinary but with a surge I yearn to thank on my knees I mean reverent though I know it isn't needed and anything I say superfluous nothing I say enough but suddenly for this meal for now grace |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Yes Ed, sometimes it is just that way... suddenly. Love this look into your thoughts. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I don't know....sometimes it just comes on to me like that. This time I thought I'd say it right out loud. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
right out loud or whispered, it is stated very nicely Ed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
... Amen. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Ed, I know the feeling. Life has been so wonderful at times that I felt I would burst if I didn't let Him know. It's great to read this! cathy |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...I'm glad you said it out loud today....I needed to hear it. You are a beautiful man!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and anything I say superfluous nothing I say enough And yet... you said it just right... and I'm so glad you said it out loud... for in doing so, you blessed us all. This is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read... and it is one I'll read again and again. *S* Superb work! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Grace, indeed... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Of course... it would be easier to read it again and again if I'd check the library box... LOL Ooops... *G* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ed~ I know this feeling SO WELL ... and feel the need often ... Taking your advice ... gonna SAY IT right out loud ! Thank you for this beauty~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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