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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2005-06-12 11:23 AM


When passions are lost,
The flame dies at your cost,
Shadows fall...
Only in a world this cold,
A story left untold,
The shadows fall...
Mother of creation wait,
Drop me off at Hell's gate,
Shadows fall...
Mother of destruction wait,
Set me up to take your bait,
Shadows fall...
The fever inside the storm,
The tension inside the dorm,
The shadows fall...
When passion's lost,
The flame dies at all cost,
Shadows fall...

i cant taste the poison that im drinking your death is in disguise

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-06-12 11:26 AM


"When passion's lost,
The flame dies at all cost,
Shadows fall..."

Hello Kyle!!
So good to read you again...
this one is cool and I like the repetition.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
2 posted 2005-06-12 12:15 PM


thank ya thank ya
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2005-06-12 03:22 PM


love this
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2005-06-12 04:37 PM


Hi, Hot Flakes! You have a very interesting and unique style to your writing.

May your passion for life and love never be lost!


EA

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