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stace_co2003
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In a dream world

0 posted 2005-06-11 11:03 PM


Separation:

Pain, crying…
Sleepless nights.
Goodbye -
I love you

Dark clouds
Cold rain
Goodbye –
I love you

Fake smiles
Cold heart
Goodbye –
I miss you

Confusing thoughts
Conflicting emotions
Goodbye –
I don’t need you

Real smiles
Tender heart
Goodbye –
I’m moving on

Sunny days
Restful nights
Goodbye –
I don’t miss you

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Here's the background:
Most of you don't know me, but I've been off and on here for...4 years. I got married in June of last year, and already I'm in the middle of a painful separation. I thought "I do" would be true, but apparently, he didn't.

If you are feeling unsuccessful just think about this: eagles may soar, but weasels don't get sucked into jet engines.

© Copyright 2005 Stacy Caudill - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2005-06-12 01:33 AM


Yes indeed, it can be painful...James
passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-06-12 07:41 AM


good write
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2005-06-12 12:44 PM


Stacy~

It is good to see you here ... sorry it has to be under such sad circumstances~
Keep writing gal ... purge the sorrow and take this to remind you that there are those here who CARE~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Mysteria
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4 posted 2005-06-12 01:13 PM


Sorry to hear your marriage didn't work, but in a way so glad you found out so early in the relationship.  Healing thoughts going to you, time is a wonderful healer.
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