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ice
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since 2003-05-17
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0 posted 2005-06-12 08:16 AM


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I can chose to touch you physically,
Without permission
To break the consistent tension,
Like stones do without thinking
When they skip across water.

But rocks are rude,
So I will beg a gentleman's license.

A "no" would suppress potentiality.

Ripples would still occur
Though different in structure,
From affirmation.

But whatever you chose
Will bring new definitions:

Even the all knows not the answer
To what might come from my question,

For it is we that are the generators
That move forward the earths processes,
Confirming our metaphysical energy.

Towards or away,
Deny or confirm, accordingly
The answer is a change will come;

For the lake of love, at first is calm
But riles by any questions cast,
From  the strong arms of negativity
Or the soft hand of a feminine 'yes"

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[This message has been edited by ice (06-12-2005 11:16 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-06-12 08:57 AM


Application for license...

Approved!

So many levels, this...
and I appreciate each one!

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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2 posted 2005-06-12 10:41 AM


Beautiful read this morning.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-06-12 10:59 AM


"Or the soft hand of a feminine 'yes" "

Ah a true gentle man you are Ford.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-06-12 03:29 PM


wonderful write...much enjoyed!
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-06-12 04:41 PM


Your respectful, softly-put question is deserving of a delicate "Yes"...


EA

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