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The Door is Open
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The Door is Open |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Door is Open What power flows, this flowers bite? That changes night into the light What thoughts parade within my head? I thought for sure were long since dead What image floats my night and day? What sense can bring it here to stay? What must I do to make it true? To dissipate the veil from you You hover o’er my wake and sleep But always stay within the deep How can I stay the sun to shine? How can I stay your heart to mine? I give to you this flower held Just hold it once and we will meld The power that it holds on me I would it hold it over thee The door is open to this goal Please enter it and make me whole |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely thoughts |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You continue to write  s...and my library is going to be forever full!    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine As my heart with you.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, You are a love. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 *winkiewinkie*   |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy the power of flowers in any relationship has been untold..until this poem. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know Sy, been around a while too, and one single flower says more to me, that dozens of roses, especially when it is held by someone sweet as you. Morning! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, A lilly once held by thee Has grown into the heart of me. WW scorpio A wonerful reply thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you for the beautiful comp. Sharon, |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
tring to figure what is the best part of this piece, that i like, ok figured it out, all of it. expecially the ending "The door is open to this goal Please enter it and make me whole" bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*sigh* ya got me with that reply me sweet Sy-guy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
bernie Enjoyed your reply, thank you. JM, Words and flowers interchange. WW |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, Sir Sy...you do continue to write keepers for us all to cherish and wander back into from time to time. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, That is a very nice thing to say, thank you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
One of my favorite poems from you... lovely words M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Thank you dear. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your so sweet and a flower does say more to ones heart than words can say at times. thanks for the smile and the warmth, life has been a bit cold lately. My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES, Hold the flower in both hands And it will stop the colds withstand. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Sy's Psychic Tea Room Leaving the reader, emerge from the experience recharged and ready to tackle any challenges with a vibrant attitude thank you dear and Good morning |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thanks, shall do just that and with your thoughts i can withstand anything My spirit will rise |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
I take said flower and wish to invite myself in to more of your beautiful words. Thank you for the lovely gift! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like your style. IT reminds me of marshmellos -Juju |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The door is open to this goal Please enter it and make me whole How could I have missed this??? Life keeps getting in the way of poetry... but I'm so glad this beauty was waiting for me... Excellent work, my friend. *S* |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!! How can such an invitation be refused...imagine being asked to share the dreams that you weave your magic with...Keep it going...your words inspire and touch so many....Another gem to sparkle on the blue pages...*big hugs* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THis is one of the most beautiful poems I can recall. It is very touching Liz |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I love this, Sy. What a lovely invitation! ....jo |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
So very lovely and inspiring. SG |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
An offer I pray she takes....  You and your flower are true treasures Sy!!! As are your poems!!!! And Sunshine is right....this is indeed a keeper!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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